Remembering Grim, A Beloved Angel ... by TheGalleryOfEve, journal
Remembering Grim, A Beloved Angel ...
For those of you who have not heard the sad news, it is with a very heavy heart that I write this journal today :heart: Please take a moment to read the sad announcement from a couple of weeks ago:
Damien Grimm was known to many of us as "GrimFace242", he then changed his username to inknalcohol (https://www.deviantart.com/inknalcohol) and with it he gave his online image a revamping :love: He was a very dear friend to many of us ~loveloveplz (https://www.deviantart.com/loveloveplz) He was the kind of person that if you had the pleasure to get to know him a little better, you would understand why for many of us, there is very little difference between "online friends" and "real life" ones :heart: If you befriended G
It's all over the news, bad news.
It comes and goes in heavy waves, and
your aunt has cancer.
It seems lately that all you do is lose
yourself, always seeing graves because
it's all over the news. Bad news:
this year is still ongoing. It's true
it feels unstoppable, and by the way
your aunt has cancer—
a snake-noose tightening grooves
into her neck and throat, giving it
its all. Over the news, bad news,
you have coffee and chatter moodily—
because what else can you do when told
your aunt has cancer—
Stare silent at the menus, choose
the easiest meal to stomach, because
it's all over. The news, bad news:
your aunt has ca
Welcome Fenris242, Free Subscription 12hrs left by Beta-Readers, journal
Welcome Fenris242, Free Subscription 12hrs left
:la: Big welcome to our new Contributor: inknalcohol (https://www.deviantart.com/inknalcohol)! He has agreed to join the funny farm team and help with those pesky responsibilities.
He's a generous and overall awesome contribution to the literature community. If you're not familiar with him, here's some quick information about what he's been up to:
He brought writers these helpful planning tools: Mythology Info Sheet and Literature Info Sheets. Right now he's working on writing tutorials, but this isn't the same old tutorial. Using polls, he's inviting the Deviantart community to help him with character creation. Participation is quick and easy (my favorite!). More information
tWR Critiques You! With double the fun! by HugQueen, journal
tWR Critiques You! With double the fun!
What is "tWR Critiques You!"?
Find out HERE, on the first blog entry we posted.
tWR Critiques You! is great to read if you want to get better at critiquing! (:
And why double the fun?
Since we haven't posted one of these articles in too long, we'll be doing a double feature today. (: We'll be studying Lychalis (https://www.deviantart.com/lychalis) and 520romeo (https://www.deviantart.com/520romeo) 's galleries and writing. :D
Let's start with 520romeo...
The work he wanted critiqued was Seven Bad Things of Minds:
So let's see what flashes right at us from the first glimpse. The formatting of the poem, undoubtedly - why was it done? 520romeo (https://www.deviantart.com/520romeo) asks if it helps understand the poem, so let's read it a first time.